Monday, November 06, 2006

Frayed Shorts

If Miss Envy would see a man dying,
She’d wish she were in his place lying.

One might be greedy, greedy indeed,
If, when knifed, is too greedy to bleed.

The things that one finds when one is lost,
Can never be bought at any cost.

Some say it is well-disguised insanity;
I think it’s just magnified reality.

Like the child’s cry in a thunderous sound,
‘Tis easily lost, difficultly found.


Blogger anonym00kie said...

did you write this? its amazing

11/06/2006 11:38 PM  
Blogger jakeyology said...

Cannot tell a lie,
It surely was I.


11/07/2006 12:58 AM  
Blogger Chaya said...

This is really great!

11/07/2006 11:04 PM  
Blogger ponys are people too said...

hm. i quite liked this. short and digestible but totally solid. the greed one's my favourite and i sort of want to steal it. not sure for what though.

11/08/2006 3:22 AM  
Anonymous a fan said...

your so freakin talented you should write an epic.

While this piece is good, the one below it is great!

keep writing. i'll keep reading ;)

11/09/2006 1:40 AM  
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11/10/2006 8:04 AM  

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